Recount Writing

In Room One we've been learning how to write a recount I did it on my birthday. I enjoyed writing my story. I found it hard writing it my second time.

Crunch crunch crunch the sound of my present made as I opened it. It was a box with a picture of a stethoscope on it. I open the box the I see a stethoscope I thought it was a toy but it wasn't it was real I wanted to use it. I put it on my chest I felt my heartbeat I was  amazed it works. I decided to go back to my laptop and play some games.Then it was school time I wanted to go early. After I got back from school I opened my second present it looked like a book in its wrapping. I open it I was correct it was a book a book about the most deadliest diseases in history. There were diseases like smallpox, the Spanish flu, cholera, and malaria in it . Then I went down to my room and put the book on my shelf. I had to wait for my dad to get home from work so I could open my final present and light my candles. After  an hour or so he got home and I could finally open my last present. I saw the present in its wrapping it was gigantic I stare at it then I decide to open it. It was a microscope as soon as I saw it, I wanted to test it on something. I started searching for a test subject that's dead. I find a bug graveyard there were spiders, moths and beetles. I chose to test the spider I put it under the microscope. I see its long hairy leg it looked like it was from a horror movie. After twenty minutes or so I got bored and wanted to light my candles. I held my baby brother and my mum sang happy birthday. My baby brother wanted to touch the candles luckily he didn’t get burnt. I blew it out smoke filled the sky and then it was gone. My cake was a chocolate cake with chocolate icing and freddo frogs on it. My dinner was amazing! I had a Pizza Hut cheese pizza, nuggets, chips, Coke, Mc flurry, and a cheese burger. I ate like a king that night. I went on the laptop for a bit then I went to bed.