In our class we've been learning how to do persuasive writing
I found it easy to find facts. And I found it hard to write about those facts.
Would you torture a chicken for a cheaper egg? I firmly believe that caged chickens should be illegal. There are to many caged chickens, there can be 40,000 caged chickens in one shed. Chickens have the space of an A4 piece of paper. 82 percent of chickens that lay eggs are caged
I found it easy to find facts. And I found it hard to write about those facts.
Would you torture a chicken for a cheaper egg? I firmly believe that caged chickens should be illegal. There are to many caged chickens, there can be 40,000 caged chickens in one shed. Chickens have the space of an A4 piece of paper. 82 percent of chickens that lay eggs are caged
Chickens that are caged can get many diseases. They can get osteoporosis. They can also get fatty. Since they get no sunlight they also get rackets.
Finally they can’t act natural. They can’t scratch for food, they can’t have dust baths to get parasite's off them, they can't flap their wings. They can’t fly. There not able to make nests. Since there so squashed they cannibalise on each other.
That's why I think caged chickens should be banned
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